The Difference Was Already There
A review of 82 Maryland real estate profiles found that many agents had meaningful experience, specialties and professional judgment. Their LinkedIn communication often failed to bring that difference
A real estate agent can spend two decades learning how to keep a transaction together, explain difficult choices, recognize a problem before it becomes a delay and steady a client who is beginning to doubt the process. That same agent can then open LinkedIn, type “Maryland REALTOR®” beneath a name and leave nearly all of that experience out of view.
The headline is accurate. It identifies the profession and the market. It may even include a brokerage, a designation or a production award. What it often does not explain is when that agent becomes especially useful, what kind of situation the agent knows how to handle or what years of experience change for the client.
That gap became the subject of a Whyte-Hall Communications Network investigation into how Maryland real estate professionals position themselves on LinkedIn. The first stage examined 82 named profiles belonging to agents and brokers connected to Maryland. The second stage reviewed 20 complete profiles selected from the three headline classifications: clearly positioned, partly positioned and interchangeable.
The deeper audit included the headline, About section, Experience, Featured material, credentials, recommendations and visible activity.
The findings pointed to a problem that was more complicated than weak self-promotion. Many agents were not as interchangeable as their headlines made them appear. Their difference already existed in their careers, specialties, transactions, former professions and public activity, but the profile did not consistently organize that evidence around one central idea the reader could understand and remember.
Most headlines identified the agent
At the headline level, the pattern was clear. Every profile in the sample identified the person as an agent, Realtor, salesperson or broker, while 80 of the 82 named Maryland, a Maryland locality or a wider service territory that expressly included the state.
Those choices performed a basic and necessary job. They told readers who the person was and where the person worked. Brokerage names, designations and rankings added further signals of affiliation, training or production.
The trouble appeared when the investigation looked for client meaning.
Only seven of the 82 headlines named a buyer, seller, investor or another defined client group. Fourteen identified a defined property, transaction or professional specialty. Five used a memorable branded phrase or professional identity. Only one headline stated a defined client problem, and only one explained a practical client benefit.
At headline level, 73.2% of the sample was classified as partly positioned, 15.9% as clearly positioned and 11% as interchangeable. The average score was 2.56 out of five.
The numbers show that most headlines performed identification more effectively than interpretation. They gave the reader facts about the professional but rarely explained what those facts meant in practice.
A designation may show that the agent completed specialized training. A ranking may show production. A brokerage name may establish affiliation. A multistate license may show geographic reach. None of those facts, standing alone, tells the reader what kind of decision the agent is prepared to guide, what problem the agent knows how to solve or why that experience should matter at a particular moment.
The complete profiles told a different story
Had the investigation stopped with the headlines, the conclusion might have been simple: most agents had not developed a meaningful difference.
The second-stage review changed that conclusion.
Of the 20 complete profiles examined, 12 finished as clearly positioned or better. Eight, or 40%, proved stronger than their headlines first suggested. One proved weaker than the headline suggested, while 11 broadly confirmed the original impression.
That movement matters because it shows where the communication failure often occurs. The professional may possess a distinct area of experience, a recognizable client group or a useful way of working. The evidence may already be visible somewhere on the profile. What is missing is the structure that carries the evidence to the surface and helps the reader interpret it.
Readers who want to examine additional profile patterns and examples can continue through the Agent Profile Library.
Lara Moore provided one of the clearest examples. Her headline, “Maryland REALTOR®,” placed her among the interchangeable group during the first review. The complete profile revealed a much stronger position.
Her About section identified military relocation, while her background as an Army veteran, an Air Force spouse and a mother of five gave that work lived context. Her Military Relocation Professional designation supported the specialty, but the value came from the connection between the credential and the experience of moving a family through uncertainty, disruption and tight timelines.
The difference was not invented during the audit. It was already present. The headline simply failed to carry it.
Casey Briggs Plaskon showed another version of the same problem. Her headline, “Licensed Maryland Real Estate Agent,” communicated little beyond licensure and location. Her recent posts revealed more.
One described the sale of one home while the clients purchased another, including the fact that the property went under contract in 11 days. Another explained how the clients’ preferred school district and target area required quick action in a competitive market.
Those posts made coordination, timing and transaction judgment visible in a way the headline and About section did not.
The reader willing to search could find the position. The profile had not yet done the work of assembling it.
Strong profiles carried one idea throughout
The profiles that scored highest did not depend on a clever headline. They repeated and supported one professional idea across several parts of the profile.
Allan Riorda’s profile consistently connected industrial real estate, the Baltimore-Washington corridor and more than 2,000 transactions. His numbers did not float as isolated proof of success. They were attached to industrial property, logistics, warehouse space, leasing, sales and market strategy. That gave the reader a clear way to interpret the experience.
Hedy Nelson’s profile showed how two professional identities can strengthen each other when their connection is explained. Her legal career and commercial brokerage work were not presented as unrelated achievements. The profile showed how more than 40 years of legal experience affected negotiation, financing, due diligence, deal structure and closing.
Her difference was not that she held two titles. It was that one body of experience changed the way she handled the other.
Fred Dorsey built his position around the real estate side of probate and inherited-property cases. The profile identified the people who may need him, including families, executors, personal representatives, attorneys and wealth managers.
It also named the situations that create the need: securing an inherited house, obtaining a date-of-death valuation, arranging a clean-out, preparing a court-approved sale or preventing real estate from delaying the larger estate process.
In each case, the profile answered more than “What do you do?”
It answered, “When does this work matter, and to whom?”
That is the point at which identification becomes positioning.
Experience does not explain itself
One of the most common assumptions in professional profiles is that the reader will understand the meaning of experience without help.
A profile may state that the agent has worked in real estate for 20 years. It may list production numbers, awards, designations or several previous careers. Those facts establish that the person has done something for a long time or received recognition for it. They do not automatically explain what the client receives because of that history.
The missing sentence is often some version of this:
“Because I have handled this work, I know how to help you with this situation.”
The partly positioned group repeatedly showed why that translation matters. Brian Coester’s profile contained a defensible combination of brokerage, appraisal, finance and technology experience.
Anthony Lacey’s profile revealed a stronger position around first-time buyers, education, negotiation and real estate as a pathway to wealth than his award-heavy headline initially suggested.
Victor D. Watson possessed substantial REO knowledge, but the profile did not bring that expertise forward with enough clarity. Nadia Khan’s full profile also proved stronger than the original headline classification suggested.
None of those professionals needed more achievements before they could communicate a difference. They needed to decide which evidence mattered most to the reader and what that evidence allowed the reader to understand.
That is also the purpose of a properly developed real estate agent biography: not merely to record experience, but to explain what the experience means to the client.
A profile can also contain too many differences
Some profiles did not suffer from a shortage of material. They suffered from competition among several legitimate identities.
Iris McCollam’s profile included Southern Maryland, bilingual English-Spanish service, an international designation, relocation, first-time buyers, investing, mortgage experience and cash-offer alternatives.
Each element had possible value, but the profile did not settle on one organizing idea.
That problem is easy to mistake for strength. A long list can make a professional appear versatile, but it can also leave the reader unable to decide what to remember.
A position does not require an agent to abandon the rest of the business. It requires the profile to give the reader a center. The central idea becomes the lens through which the rest of the experience is understood.
Without that center, the About section becomes a catalogue, the Experience section becomes a chronology and the activity becomes a loose collection of updates. The profile may contain impressive information while producing little recall.
The profile must make the connection
The audit also found profiles in which transferable experience was visible but untranslated.
Juanita Boone’s work history included claims review, appeals, compliance, banking and customer service. Those roles suggest experience with records, regulated processes and document accuracy, but the profile did not connect that background to the needs of a real estate client.
James Young’s background included more than 15 years of retail sales leadership, team development and customer service. His About section continued to describe the retail-management identity rather than explaining how that experience affected his work as a Maryland real estate agent.
A reader might infer that one professional is careful with documents and that the other understands follow-through, service standards and sales discipline. The profile should not depend on that inference.
A professional profile has to make the bridge visible. It should explain what happened in the earlier work, what skill or judgment developed there and how that knowledge now affects the client’s real estate experience.
What the investigation can and cannot establish
The Maryland study examined communication. It did not measure business performance.
It cannot show that a stronger LinkedIn position produces more leads, more referrals, more appointments or more closed transactions. The investigation did not collect inquiry data, revenue figures or direct responses from prospective clients.
It can establish what the profiles communicated, what they left unexplained and how the full-profile evidence changed the first impression created by the headline.
That narrower finding is still useful.
Most of the agents in the sample told readers what they were and where they worked. Far fewer explained the client situation, professional judgment or practical method that made their experience meaningful.
When the full profiles were examined, the investigation often found that the missing difference was not absent from the professional’s career. It was absent from the way the career had been organized and explained.
Four questions can bring the difference forward
A real estate professional reviewing a LinkedIn profile can begin by asking four questions.
First, what kind of work best represents the judgment, experience or recurring value behind the business? The answer does not have to cover every transaction ever handled. It should identify the work that most clearly shows why the professional is useful.
Second, who most needs that work? “Buyers and sellers” may be accurate, but it is usually too broad to help a reader recognize a situation. Military families, estate representatives, industrial tenants, first-time buyers, investors and families coordinating a sale with a purchase can see themselves more clearly.
Third, what does the experience change for that person? It should affect something the client can understand, such as timing, preparation, negotiation, risk, coordination, explanation or confidence.
Finally, where does the profile prove the position? The headline introduces the idea, but the About section, Experience, Featured material, recommendations and activity must support it.
These questions do not ask the professional to manufacture a brand or create a personality that does not exist. They ask the profile to interpret the work already being done.
The difference may already be there
The clearest finding from the Maryland investigation is not that real estate agents need louder headlines.
It is that many need a more disciplined explanation of their existing value.
Their distinction may be sitting in a former career, a recurring client problem, a transaction pattern, a specialty, a community connection or a way of handling work that clients repeatedly depend on.
The profile weakens when those pieces remain scattered and the reader is expected to assemble them alone.
Identification tells the reader what the professional is.
Positioning explains when that professional matters.
For many of the agents reviewed in Maryland, the second answer was already present. It simply had not been carried to the surface.
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Thank you for spending part of your day with me. I hope today’s investigation gives you something useful to notice the next time you read a LinkedIn profile or explain your own work.
See you on the porch.
— Delroy A. Whyte-Hall